I stood there alone without the abillity to utter the words I longed to speak.No voice.No life.Only pain and death.I stood on the edge of a knife where my heart was so empty,but then I saw him:a tall,handsome boy,looking at me.I thought I was loosing it,because no person had ever looked at me in such a way.then I wake up out of my insanity to be sane again,at the midway of my exhaustion.I was so tired.and yet,my insanity broke at the sight of my love.there he stood,holding me in his arms,smiling at me.I was not alone.i wasnt insane,i was lonely,but then he appeared to comfort me in my time of sorrow and doupt.my fiance.

wow.very deep.i like it though,its got a good but sleepy vibe.i like that it sounds like a poem.i really like poems as you can probably tell.here is one of mine:

on the wind of the ocean the birds broke the silence of the silent and calm wahing of waves.the ocean,so perfectly blue and beautiful with its icy blue waters and pure white sand,no loud noises or bothersome neigbors...PEACE.i was at peace.then i light shown from behind me and the sea before me turned into a dark abyss before my feet and i saw a fleet of warriors charging toward me.i longed to turn to the light...but i couldnt.i faced this rampage and death before me and realized:'the light is still shining,even with this horrible pit of darkness sucking in everything:ther is always the light:goodness,will once again prevail.

hope you enjoyed it!!